- Fix gendered pronoun: "he'll" → "they'll" - Align contingency figure: 10% → 10–20% (consistent with C7/C8 guidance) - "despite the fact that" → "even though" - Add bridge sentence before KfW section connecting to section 9 of plan framework - Sharpen personal guarantees closer: "That comes across in a bank conversation" → "Banks can tell." Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>